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Open Poetry #49

My Demons

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2014-09-19 09:13 PM

And my demons,
they-
they laugh
beautifully
with your lips
they watch
hauntingly
with your eyes
They mock
my pain

My demons
they-
they wear your face.

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-09-19 09:17 PM

It is so GOOD to be reading you again, Tina, you just have no idea. You put you very soul into your words.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2014-09-19 11:30 PM

Good writing, Trina.
Ida

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

3 posted 2014-09-20 02:15 AM

You are on a roll my girl. Keep it up.Enjoying your posts.Jo Perry

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2014-09-20 08:14 AM

Well, Trina, it is like this;(if autobiographical) you are vicious with your pen, you cut deep within yourself and find and articulate artery and slice it length wise to pulsate some of the most intense poetry on paper I've ever read. I don't read your poetry...it stabs me. Just tellin' it like it is for me. Glad you are back.

Lori

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2014-09-22 05:20 AM

So extremely well worded, dear Trina!

Love,
Margherita

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