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Open Poetry #49
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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
0 posted 2014-08-16 03:01 PM


1
Is she real,
Can I only look or can I feel?
See her sway,
Did her eyes look my way?
2
Real? Look but don’t feel,
Sway, eyes fixed, fix them my way,
Is she, isn’t she, Real.
3
Reality, Untouched but by eyes
Body sways, look to me

Gloom

Something not quite so 'edgy'
An exercise in word play.
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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2014-08-16 05:43 PM

Good job!!  Love the look.
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