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Momma it's raining
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Momma it's raining |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813
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Momma it's raining the drops drizzle down my cheeks drawing me into your embrace the softness a welcome middle between the days of aridity and the torrential downpour that sometimes pass my way momma I miss you thank you for the rain |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Love that word "aridity." What a very revealing, very short poem. Momma is still with you. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
My father was very fond of the rain. Now, I can't help but think of him when it actually does rain here... and I have to smile. A lovely tribute to your mother. Michael |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
The rain falls tenderly from your heart to hers in fond remember |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ha! Not what I expected! Beautifully written. jimmy |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
luminosity.Enjoyed your raindrops of reminisce. jo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh I love this sweet sentiment it is so poignant and heart felt. Beautiful poetry. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful, poignant write! You express both the missing... and the gratitude for memories... and leave both an ache and a smile. *S* Miss you, sweet lady!!! HUGS! |
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kingsangel Member
since 2009-11-04
Posts 50 |
Cute reminds me of me and my son some mornings before school... kingsangel |
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