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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2014-07-22 02:21 PM

When I see you, anytime that might be,
It is a spirit that I see, not just a lovely form,
It is a heart warm, that gets my blood flowing,
And the knowing, what used to be,
When I see you.

When I touch you, not ever often enough for me,
I feel anguish flee, chill dissipates in warm
Touching your form, a caress of emotion growing,
And the knowing, what it could be,
When I touch you.

When I think of you, more often than you believe,
I feel my heart grieve, knowing thoughts of you
Are all that I do, for you’re not here,
Not even near, and they can be,
Dreams aren’t reality.

Gloom

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-07-22 04:34 PM

You really know how to choke a person up, you know that? Obviously a good write.

Lori

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2014-07-22 05:19 PM

True enough...about dreams and how they collide with reality.

This is a bittersweet beauty...

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2014-07-23 12:43 PM

Glad to see you writing again, Professor.
Ida

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2014-08-15 10:23 PM

I have missed reading you, Professor. I enjoyed this visit. Please write again soon!

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2014-08-16 02:24 PM

Thank you all who read my humble words
I understand the difficulty my subject matter causes to the ability to respond.

Lori,
I am honored that I touched emotionally.
Blues,
I find less and less I want to separate dreams and reality
And often wish to step from one to the other.
Ida,
Thank you, I write much more than I post.
Sunshine,
Another is here now,
Sorry it isn’t bright and happy, but that’s expected.

Gloom

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2014-08-18 10:48 AM

Beautiful, poignant and very touching!

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