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Open Poetry #49

We Are So Broken

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2014-07-20 02:36 PM

We are so broken,
you and I…
We scream at each other.
We haven’t had
a simple conversation
in who knows how long.
We can’t even be
in the same room together
for any length of time
(unless we’re sleeping)
without arguing.
We are so broken,
you and I…
It is unpleasant for others
to be around us.
It is embarrassing.
With you,
I am on the edge
of anger, always.
You know I love you
and you use it
against me.
You tell me
you don’t feel loved.
Then I don’t feel loved
either
It is a vicious cycle.
We are so broken,
you and I…

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-07-20 02:40 PM

Sad fact of life spiraling out of control, my dear friend. I certainly have no answers, I can only say I hate for your life to be so out of control. I truly am.

~*~ Tell the truth, but tell it slant.--Emily Dickimsom ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2014-07-20 09:51 PM

This too shall pass. Adolescence doesn't last forever. I believe in the power of love to triumph in the end.

Lori

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2014-07-23 12:48 PM

It will. Maturity will set in and things will change over night.
Ida

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2014-07-24 10:56 AM

"It is a vicious cycle.
We are so broken,"

Cycles are made for breaking...
Sometimes it only takes one to reflect, remember, and be at peace. Always takes two to tango, that's easy...

Enjoyed the read, the sorrow not so much.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2014-07-24 03:57 PM

Now we are waltzing!...and it works so much better!

Lori

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