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MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

0 posted 2014-01-21 09:23 PM

Candles burn low with no one to blow them out

Notes fall flat with no one to sing their tune

And our wishes tie our tongues with no place to send them to

The day comes and goes
quietly
as is now its way

But my thoughts are on you
always on you

Because this will always be your day

Happy Birthday

"I'll tell you how the sun rose
A ribbon at a time..." - Emily Dickinson

[This message has been edited by MorningStar (01-23-2014 12:14 AM).]

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2014-01-21 09:37 PM

Everyone remembers birthdays.

Perhaps more fondly in our hearts and memories. It's my way to think of them sometimes as anniversaries.

Good thoughts in your poetry.

...just bein' Bluesy

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2014-01-22 01:53 AM

Lovely write, Morningstar.
Ida

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

3 posted 2014-01-22 01:57 AM

Fondly rembering loved ones on their birthday.
Well captured!
Kat >^..^<

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2014-01-22 07:17 AM

Lovely to see you back, Aenea!

There is an ache in this beautiful poem that goes all the way down to the marrow of my bone and brings tears to my eyes.

I think you meant to have a ‘to’ in:

Notes fall flat with no one sing their tune

Owl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2014-01-22 08:24 AM

A very soothing poem about a person you feel close to, Aenea, and it tugged at me.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

6 posted 2014-01-22 03:27 PM

sad and happy
like melancholy sweetness

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

7 posted 2014-01-22 11:41 PM

Thank you all for the welcoming arms and the kind words. They mean so much!

"I'll tell you how the sun rose
A ribbon at a time..." - Emily Dickinson

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2014-02-04 09:34 PM

nice...James

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