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Open Poetry #49

Twin Shades

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-01-21 03:01 AM

Through twin shades a pale yellow light peers through
Shadows move across the room

Goblets spent of seduction's taste
Morning's remorse seems such a waste.

For a time they were lovers, full of wonder
Now dawn brings thieves with hearts to plunder

The stench of loves' malignant deception,
will arrive at afternoons' wedding reception.

And what of airs could cover the scent,
of a brides' affair, her virginity spent?

A groom deserving of her flower..,
knows the sweet, has turned to sour.

To him, his love, like crystal, shattered
To her, twin shades, were all that mattered.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-01-21 09:24 AM

Whoa! Dynamite writing, Blues. One of those, "Damn! I wish I'd've said that."

The good Lord didn't create anything without a purpose, but mosquitoes come close.

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2014-01-21 06:07 PM

Thanks for the read Jerry.

(Probably best you never had to say it)

...just bein' Bluesy

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

3 posted 2014-01-21 11:26 PM

Wonderful! enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2014-02-06 12:13 PM

Thank you so much Kat for reading!

Regards from Bluesy

...just bein' Bluesy

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