Open Poetry #48 |
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Mountain Ash in Spring |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams ![]() |
Mountain Ash in Spring Mountain Ash Birds will no longer eat your fruit So why must you hold on? Juju -Juju |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Because of the intricate natural identity awarded to life holding on to the very end. Or, something like that..... Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Dreading to have to give in to defeat and death. Nice poem. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Even without fruits a tree is still a majestic view... and it loves the breeze of life on its branches. This is well done, even if you intended it as a metaphor. It makes one think. M |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Its about holding on to the past instead of the future. (: The mountain ash is one of my favorite trees -Juju |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Well done, Juju. Smiles Ms. E |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
very well put... *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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