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Slow Dancing |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Uploaded with ImageShack.us Slow dancing, head on my shoulder, She's forty, I'm one year older. Our bodies hugged together close, It feels if we're not wearing clothes. Sweet perfume I smell that you wear, Is almost more than I can bear. Your body is pressed against mine, I'm heady and it's not the wine. The music slow and sensuous, Seems to be for the both of us. The dance floor is crowded tonight, Everyone's smiling love's delight. You murmur softly in my ear, I swear it almost brings a tear. I heard the words, they were so sweet, There's a motel right down the street. ©May 10, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I can just picture this, the poem reeks of her perfume. Well done my friend! Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, and I know that perfume's smell well. Thank you for being here, Lori. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
Don't tell me.....you had already booked the room Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heehee You take all the fun out of it, Michael. Gotta love it. Thanks for checking me out. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
LOL...senually done...what a vision this poem brings... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many thanks, Karen. Yes, it brought back some pretty darn interesting memories too. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ya ol trickster you had me goin real good in this romantic rhyme and then ya slipped down the street to the motel....He he you're a hot case and it's a lot of fun..... Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! Sorry about that, Eric, I just couldn't help myself. That wasn't the way I had planned for it to end, but, well, like I said, I couldn't help myself. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he Jerry, I think you know I know where you're comin from.. I'm a red blooded Canadian boy and you're a red blooded American boy and we understand each other. Have a good day my friend. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
title spoken.... swaying to the music.... just me and my guy.... Love it! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Karilea. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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