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hollym12
Junior Member

since 2012-04-02

Posts 21
las vegas,nevada

0 posted 2012-05-08 05:35 PM

~~~~~You really shouldn't~~~~~
You really shouldn't Play on the freeway.
You really shouldn't Run with knifes.
You really shouldn't Play with fire.
You really shouldn't Call 911 when you dont need to.
You really shouldn't Drive with your eyes closed
You really shouldn't Yell at your parents
You really shouldn't Set the house on fire.
You really shouldn't Pull your little sister's hair.
You really shouldn't Put gum in the girls hair that sit in front of you.
You really shouldn't tell others what to do.
You really shouldn't have kids when your young.
__Valerie Moore

http://www.amazon.com/Poetry-for-Lovers-ebook/dp/B007ZR2SQK/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1336011488&sr=1-1

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2012-05-08 08:27 PM

Hey Ms. Holly,
Enjoyed your poem but, you really must consider
one day publishing your poems ... I look forward to reading many more in the future.
Ms. E

hollym12
Junior Member

since 2012-04-02

Posts 21
las vegas,nevada

2 posted 2012-05-08 09:21 PM

http://www.amazon.com/Poetry-for-Lovers-ebook/dp/B007ZR2SQK/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1336011488&sr=1-1

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2012-05-09 05:36 PM

No you really shouldn't!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2012-05-12 04:05 AM

Nice...how about a really should one...James

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2012-05-21 02:22 PM

I'm with James on this one...
I think a "You really Should" would be a nice contrast.

Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2012-05-21 11:10 PM

Diddo on the should one...wonderful writing...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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