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Open Poetry #48

Adi's Lavendar Bubble

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

0 posted 2012-05-04 01:51 AM

Adi's Lavendar Bubble

A weightless glass window
a sphere,
a life cyclical,
wobbles gently
as she breathes soft breaths
to keep it afloat, buoyant
in the air.

Each time it drifts
yielding down,
into reality,
it is once again enticed
tenderly upward
by the soft breaths
that keep it afloat, delicate
in the air.

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E.M.L.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-05-04 06:04 AM

Almost surrealism is this little masterpiece of poetical endeavor, MS E.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2012-05-04 11:37 AM

Simple yet beautiful, Edna.
Ida

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-05-04 04:54 PM

I agree...this poem is simply beautiful...

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2012-05-05 08:59 AM

JP, Ida and Star, Big Thank you for looking in and enjoying the poem.
ms. e

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2012-05-05 09:19 AM

Not sure what you mean here but it sure is a nice peaceful write.
I loved roaming through it I envisioned a bubble bath but then what do I know.....smile....

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

6 posted 2012-05-06 11:40 AM

Thank you Ethome for stopping by.
The poem is about a young woman who lives her life in love ... always looking for joy.
Ms. E

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2012-05-06 07:48 PM

This is magical, dear Ebonygirl. I deeply enjoyed the wonderful imagery.

Margherita

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

8 posted 2012-05-06 10:09 PM

Thank you, Margherita, I am always honored when you stop by... Smiles, ms. e

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