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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada 
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Rebirth Clouds gather darkly over head it is the storm I’m wishing for Most people will look up with dread and run inside to slam their door I stretch out my arms to embrace while breathing deeply the ozone Powerful winds caress my face as trees bend to the building moan The magic wraps around me tight lifting me out of human form Flying through darkness feels so right when my spirit joins with the storm The brilliant lightning hits the ground sending flaming sparks in my blood Turning night to day all around bringing with it a cleansing flood Sudden thunder breaks the silence swallowing my pure primal scream Words that are filled with defiance torn from within to the extreme I fall exhausted to the earth feeling my deepest soul is clean Starting a new day with rebirth as a person none have ever seen Karen Mc Neil May 2, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I totally love this poem. My body felt the energy, the electricity, transforming my soul. Big smiles, Ms. E |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! A highly emotional trip through the majesty of a thunderstorm. Superb passion in this write. I just hope you don't get too close to those flashes of lightning. Scientists have calculated that if they could harness the electrical energy in one flash of lightning they'd have enough power to supply New York City for 10 years. The creator spreads a glorious majestic table doesn't he? Good stuff Karen!! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hey! Hey! You said you loved thunderstorms when you commented on my poem, "I'm Almost Certain I will Die," Karen, and you have proven it here. This is vibrant and exhilarating! ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
electrifying  Michael |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Quite an exciting experience, Karen. ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This is really powerful and I identify with your feelings. Excellent write, dear Karen. Margherita |
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