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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-04-02 08:45 AM

This world is jam- packed with hurt;
          send a calming wind, my sweet,
          where we find to talk is our home
          for that moment, fingers reaching
          for fingers, to stroke, to look into
          our eyes and see love, utter love.

We're exiled into a world within a world;
          finding peace and true contentment,
          confessing our inner selves, holding
          what needs to be held, letting go what
          can only damage us, and the free will
          to find that exposed will to love.

©March 22, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ I changed my iPod name to Titanic. It's syncing now. ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2013-04-02 09:53 AM

Jerry, you just get better and better - must be that coonass sunshine, rain and wind that so full of goodness it's marinating you in spite of yourself!!

cool piece, my friend.

jimmy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-04-02 10:16 AM

I must agree about you getting better and better, and your writing is improving too

You have such a romantic heart my friend, you would soften even then the coldest heart of stone. I would file this one under Special!

lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2013-04-02 10:39 AM

You may have a point, Jimmy, there is something abut this coonass sunshine . . . Thank you.

~*~ I changed my iPod name to Titanic. It's syncing now. ~*~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-04-02 10:40 AM

Lori, you do know how to make a guy feel . . . well . . . special and thank you for doing that this morning.

~*~ I changed my iPod name to Titanic. It's syncing now. ~*~

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

5 posted 2013-04-02 12:16 PM

quote:
We're exiled into a world within a world...

I really enjoyed reading about that world. Nice!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2013-04-02 12:46 PM

Thank you very much, Bob, for you kind words . . .

~*~ I tried to catch some fog. I mist. ~*~

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