I've been away, here is a new poem.

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Open Poetry #48

I've been away, here is a new poem.

Nocturnal Pulse
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since 2010-08-12

Posts 84
Australia

0 posted 2013-04-02 07:07 AM

The moon hung like marble,
loveless' caught in the marvel,
of the vast, vapid gargle;
the sea.

In the sandy expanse,
on a vacuous shore,
Some rats would dance,
rather two; no more.

Through the nooks they’d scurry,
claws, paws and feet in flurry
and shake off the sand,
without worry.

They’d gaze at the star-spattered sky, and
on tail-curled neck is where they’d rest.
For people who know that rats are best.

Nocturnal Pulse
Member

since 2010-08-12

Posts 84
Australia

1 posted 2013-04-03 03:22 AM

As stated in the title: I've been away for a long while, but I look forward to actively posting again. For anyone who remembers me, I look forward to reading your material again : )

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

2 posted 2013-04-03 01:42 PM

Much like a work maybe by Lewis Carroll or something, I like that your poem appeals to the inner child. Enjoyed!

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