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Open Poetry #48
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ponderthepoetorrsx
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0 posted 2012-04-29 11:04 PM


serenity is like a candle
but so is rage
and when one flickers
the other shows
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Startime1955
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1 posted 2012-04-29 11:30 PM

Interestinh words to ponder...this is the line I liked the best..."serenity is like a candle"
ethome
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2 posted 2012-04-30 01:46 AM

I like the angle of perception.
Clever presentation.

Eric

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JerryPat2
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3 posted 2012-04-30 05:58 AM

Yes, there is a thin red line between the two emotions, ponderthepoetorrsx.

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secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2012-04-30 07:53 AM

well said !
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