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Open Poetry #48

my escape

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

0 posted 2012-04-28 02:08 PM

i dislike this very much.
One of my worst i thought.

[This message has been edited by dreamgal (04-28-2012 04:19 PM).]

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-04-28 02:24 PM

So beautiful...if only we could bottle it...then again you have brought it to life with your words...I could feel the awe that filled all my senses...I love this poem...

ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

2 posted 2012-04-28 02:36 PM

yeah i liked it since we all have our own realm o\f sorts

dreamgal
Member

since 2011-03-17

Posts 442

3 posted 2012-04-28 02:45 PM

Thank you both for stopping by! I think were the only 3 here today lol

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2012-04-28 03:00 PM

Enjoyed the read and thoughts, my friend.

j.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2012-04-28 03:09 PM

The sights and wonderful smells of your magic tunnel, Denise, is apparently alive and well within you, and yes, would that you could release it all onto the world. This poem gives rise to that possibility for those who stop here long enough to read it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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