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Open Poetry #48

Unfolding of Moments

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-04-25 11:37 PM

Unfolding of Moments

I believe those things
that I can perceive.
In the sincerity of
pursuing a relationship
sometimes you have
to forget desire,
let go of hope and
give up on your dreams
and simply live day
by day in the honest
unfolding of the moments.

JamesLee
26April
2012

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

1 posted 2012-04-26 12:18 PM

Sometimes that is so true! You sound like a realist

Amaryllis

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-04-26 09:33 AM

I agree, but it is very hard to forget about your preconceived notions.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-04-26 09:50 AM

Written with unselfish motives of true friendship...I love it

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2012-04-26 07:14 PM

James
Good advice until the next dream comes along.
We are all vulnerable to the leadings of the heart.
I really like this!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

5 posted 2012-04-26 08:28 PM

Oh so true! I really felt this one, enjoyed.
Kat >^..^<

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2012-06-04 12:36 PM

I wish I'd read this years ago... instead of looking back and realizing how I sabotaged too many moments. *S* Excellent write!!

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