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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2012-04-25 10:13 AM

I left my longing
where you would find it
Hoping you would
recognize it
and know
it was for you
I left my longing
where you could touch it
Hoping you would
satisfy it
Because
it was for you

LGR©4/25/12

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-04-25 10:25 AM

Interesting posting, and if you left it for him, I imagine he would figure it out and find it. I know I would.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-04-25 10:56 AM

How true these simple words convey the reaching out of a heart filled with hope he will find it and reach back...well done

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2012-04-25 10:57 AM

You would think it would be that simple but life gets complicated sometimes. Thanks my friend.

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2012-04-25 11:03 AM

Thanks Startime, Sometimes the reaching gets out of whack.

Lori

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2012-04-25 05:45 PM

Keep leaving it out there.
It just might be fear of rejection or even shy.
You know the cliche, if at first you don't succeed then bash the dumb jerk on the side of the head and wake him up....

Did I really write that.

I'll send him the address of my optometrist.

Enjoyed the read very much.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

6 posted 2012-04-26 01:17 AM

Lori, Your poem is well written. Ethome has some good advice, with humor.
I hope your He wakes up.
ms. e

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

7 posted 2012-04-26 01:24 AM

The longing..."sigh"
Been there! Enjoyed your poem.
Kat >^..^<

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2012-04-26 08:27 AM

Thanks for the advice Eric...I think I will have to trip him face down in my roses so he will have to take time to smell them.

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2012-04-26 08:29 AM

Ebonygirl-I'll get him awake one way or another...I always do (wink)

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

10 posted 2012-04-26 08:30 AM

Thanks Kat! Frustrating isn't it?

Lori

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