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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2012-04-25 06:17 AM

there would always be that in the middle place
between you running for cover from the rain
and just standing there nude within it

as if the balance was just keeping score
of how many times you got wet vs didn't
and you could always do makeup games later

if one or the other got out of hand a bit
and if I were to be there liesurely nudging
til sometimes you just lost balance completely

and fell face down between the limbs of pretty
refusing to get back up on your owned two feet
unless I helped pull you back onto my intentions

and let you master me with your sweet submission

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daark

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

1 posted 2012-04-25 06:47 AM

laughing... "leisurely nudging"

This is like walking a tightrope; where falling one way or the other is more fun than bad.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2012-04-25 07:19 AM

Ms Nicole..thanks ms

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-04-25 11:01 AM

LOL I don't know where my head is but I sure loved the image...well put...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2012-04-25 11:23 AM

Star, thanks for where your mind went..

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2012-04-25 05:50 PM

This is a sequel to Gene Kelly's "Singin In The Rain" isn't it?

I like the turnabout in this line...

"and let you master me with your sweet submission"

Oh I love the poetic adventures you pen....Keep it up.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2012-04-25 05:55 PM

Eman..thanks for the reviews amigo-

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

7 posted 2012-04-25 08:04 PM

ah damn....

did someone say....50 Shades of Grey??? or should I say 50 Shades Darker...than ever~*

damn. I've missed you, daddy~*~ LOL...thank god for these Blue pages! XOXO

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2012-04-28 01:59 AM

Sounds like some interesting stuff going on, especially if a cello is involved...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2012-05-07 12:07 PM

quote:
unless I helped pull you back onto my intentions

and let you master me with your sweet submission

The art of seduction expressed masterfully.

Margherita

darkclown
New Member

since 2012-05-09

Posts 2
State of Dark

10 posted 2012-05-09 07:51 AM

Making the words work for you at their darkest best.

Hell is empty and all the devils are here.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2012-05-09 12:29 PM

BBBel1e, thanks little one

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JM, thanks amigo

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Ms mar, thanks lady friend

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Dark, thank you and welcome to PIP

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