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Lady Love
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Lady Love |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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jazz song lyrics reworked Lady Love She comes quietly from the daylight she draws up close with fine perfume city sounds fade out of mind when lady love walks into the room. She brings a spell to put you under an old trick you can't refuse hungry hearts beat like thunder when lady love walks into the room. She can glove your best endeavour and she'll melt you with her flame lonely souls search for each other when lady love plays her game. Dream sailor score yourself a lover the winds of charm are blowing through there's adventures to discover when lady love walks into the room. She's got those gold contract pictures she's in the Penthouse with a view and every eye will drift to her when lady love walks into the room. Bartender pour the boys a buffer it's another highball afternoon they just can't stay undercover when lady love walks into the room. She's got dancing rosy color and legs for miles above her shoes so dream sailor score yourself a lover here comes lady love into the room true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...I believe a few have walked into rooms I was frequenting...James |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Full of music...lovely  A |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Cool poem, cool lyrics for a song. Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You'd better believe that when lady love walks into the room sanity flees. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love this! Such a cool rhythm you wove in here, dear Eric, your Lady Love is pure temptation... Margherita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks James, I know a few have walked into rooms I happened to be in. I appreciate the comment. Eric Amaryllis Thanks for the read and the fine comment. Eric Ms. E Yep, that's the idea lyrics for a jazz song like Al Jurreau might sing. Thanks for the kind comment. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Ahhh....the sound of you words still wrap the heart in beauty...beautiful read... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Startime for the kind words. Long time no communicate but always nice to hear from you. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Jerry Yep you know it and thanks for the recognition. Eric Margherita Trying my best to get the flow into the timing to take the melody just right. Thanks so much! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This is awsome Eric! Lori |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Lori I appreciate the kind comment very much. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sounds like a most interesting and musical lady, Eric. Ida |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yep, very interesting Ida, the kind that turns heads. Thanks for the read and the comment. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Eric...You the man...Great jazzy song. I could hear Eric Clapton singing this in his slow soulful voice. Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
I really enjoyed this, like everyone else is saying i found myself singing this instead of reading it. Its catchy, flirty, full of temptation good write! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Paul Thanks for the reply and I could see old slow hand doing this too. The difference is, I wish he would....LOL! Many thanks. Eric Its catchy, flirty, full of temptation good write! Why thank you dreamgal that's the way it's supposed to be, much appreciated. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..yep, another beauty..! ..much enjoyed..>>spiros ~~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Spiros. I appreciate the positive comment. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this one. Made me smile. -Juju |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Juju I like to get a smile out of a reader once in a while..... I appreciate the read and the comment. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is an excellent read. Thanks for sharing. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Eloise. Thanks for stopping in and reading this lyric. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This one is so melodic I'm in the club, trying to see the stage through the smoky haze... as a "whiskey and cigarette" voice tells it like it is. *S* Beautiful work!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Suthern you sure put a nice twist in there with your response, thank you for the visit and the kind comment. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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