Open Poetry #48 |
Our Forever Love |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I say that you're my queen, You tell me you're not. I tell you how I feel, Our love is a long shot. Love for you fills my heart, It's the same every day. You are my everything, And that's not a cliché. This world we've created, Is Heaven-sent and true. Even though a secret, And have to talk on cue. When we are together, We speak of love's refrain. We both know its special, Me Tarzan and you’re Jane. Meeting the way we did, I say it was just fate, That we should meet and love, Like loving soul mates. This, then is our courtship, Offering what we can. To give love and receive, Seems like a good game plan. I am thankful for us, And our growing romance. I kiss your lips and smile, That we have had this chance. ©January 7, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Glad you are so happy my friend Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Lori, I sure am. ~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful...love brings us such sweetness |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
sweet stuff~ Mr. Pat!~*~
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You are right with your analysis, LeeJ, and I thank you for it. <><> Nice for you to say, Baby Girl, I appreciate it . . . ~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
am loving your romantic side Jerry, this is beautiful. Love is the life of the soul... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, tracie66, it is difficult not to be romantic when you are in love with the most beautiful, wonderful woman in the world. ~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This world we've created, Is Heaven-sent and true. Even though a secret, And have to talk on cue. And isn't that just what adds to its intensity! Very lovely heart-speak, Jerry. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep. Intensity for sure, Margherita. Thank you for being here. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I like the lilt in the voice here, Jerry. The romance is heady, but the love is a gift of life. Big Smile, with a capital "S"! Karen |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Klassy Lassy, thank you for your wise words, and thank you for just being here. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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