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Open Poetry #48

Missing Words

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-04-18 10:06 PM

Missing Words

I want to say words,
words I want to say
to a person I know,
words I want to hear
from that person also
and if I do I'll respond
in the affirmative too.
Perhaps I will...
if the words are
meant to be said
and if not they will be
lost in the desires of time
never to be set free within
the pleasures of eternity.

JamesLee
17April
2012

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2012-04-18 10:17 PM

Wishing you well, my friend, my fingers are crossed for you...

j.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2012-04-19 02:34 AM

Well who is better with words than a poet, James?
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2012-04-19 08:31 AM

I think that words of love inspired by our hearts are strongly meant to be uttered ... and I am sure that you will pronounce them!

Lovely "maybe-poem", dear James.

Margherita

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2012-04-21 10:13 AM

"lost in the desires of time
never to be set free within
the pleasures of eternity."

Nice lines I really like them!!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2012-04-22 12:09 PM

Thank you jwesley, Marchmadness, Margherita and ethome for the nice responses...James

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