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Open Poetry #48

For your love

hollym12
Junior Member

since 2012-04-02

Posts 21
las vegas,nevada

0 posted 2012-04-18 12:14 PM

For your love I would climb Mt. Everest.
I Would swim across the deepest ocean.
I would swim across the Colorado river.
I would walk across the Mojave Desert.

To have you by my side,you make me whole,
you captured my soul. With one look, You gave me hope.
When you came in my life. Every time I see you you my heart
skips a beat. I thank god that he sent you to me.
My angle, My strength, My love.

Valerie Moore

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2012-04-18 02:13 PM

hi hollym 12, this is beautiful, that's what love is so excellent at doing, all these things are great and worth a lot, thanks for the moving poem,

yann

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-04-18 02:17 PM

Love is many things to many people. I can see that it is everything to you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2012-04-18 02:18 PM

Hi Valerie...

I think you may have meant "angel" not "angle" in the last line.

Enjoyed the read, my friend...

j.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2012-04-18 10:11 PM

This person has made an impression on your heart...James

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