Open Poetry #48 |
The Goddess and the Moon |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
The moon hangs blood-red tonight that can only mean the Goddess and the old man in the moon are deep in celestial mediation I, am the only mortal who can see and appreciate the Goddess's mystery and her enchanted ways I stand very, very still listening in on the moon and the Goddess's serenade and my uttermost fears are soothed forthwith for the music unlike any I have ever beheld speaks words to me instead of notes with such a voice of love you can't imagine the celestial music the Goddess speaks to me says, I am with you always though it may seem I'm faraway and not paying attention but I am here, forever her voice resounded like soothing, delicate word/notes makes me think of word/jazz I was struck dumb and could only nod as I felt the lightest feather-tender brush upon my lips bells chimed somewhere sealing into my heart the calming words the Goddess had just spoken and the mysterious melody composed by the Goddess and the man in the moon raptured my heart with a gentle tug and I understood that the gentle brush upon my lips was the Goddess' magic, delicious kiss leaving the scent of ripe peaches on my mouth ©April 5, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-15-2012 09:20 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Exquisite, Jerry! A blessed and inspired moment wonderfully rendered. Yes, there is not a moment in which She is separated from you and when you become aware of this truth, it's pure deep delight, just as you say so beautifully. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I wholeheartedly concur with your assumption that there is not a moment that the Goddess is separated from me. A comforting feeling. Thank you, Margherita. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"there is not a moment that the Goddess is separated from me. A comforting feeling.". Everyone has their own method of belief, don't they, my friend....you have this Goddess, others hve their God, and more have a belief of no belief at all. Pretty write, my friend. j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, J., a pretty comment from you too . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Beautiful write, I can see it in my mind. Love this one! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate your kind words, Lori. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And you..m'friend. Are playing my song! I am enjoying this introspective side of you very much. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, thank you very much, Karen, for the nice-nice. I am happy your song is my song. Appreciate the hug and the love. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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