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Dark Water. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Lost, the smudged light within wet woodland, blacking the trees. Walking alone,no amber light, no twig snap, just continuous cold creeping around me. No way out, trees, long straight lines stretching for miles. Turning full circle, mirrors of tree lines. Somewhere she sees me and lifts no hand or finger to help. Though my dreams are haunted by her, i am lost here, in a wilderness of darkness, clung by fog, bejewelled by water drops pellucidly paling my skin, starved of love,life. Awaiting her dawn to warm me,bathe me,shine light to my inner sanctuary, to blossom love once again. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Philip, May some glorious light shine soon upon your dreams...for if you love, you are blessed. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I would wish also ... for reclamation via that dawn of new love! you 'word-paint' a powerful picture in this 'write' ! The Ancient Greeks, of course, only asked one thing about a person when he/she died: Did they have 'passion' ?! You are most assuredly a poet of passion! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Love will shine in when you let... which is the tricky part. I know heart ache hurts. Juju -Juju |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sometimes that light shines on you when you least expect it, Phil. ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deep melancholy drips from this very well written page, dear Goldenrose. When we are seemingly lost in sadness, the Supreme Source of Light will manifest His presence and we shiver no more. Margherita |
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