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Silver Sanctuary.
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Silver Sanctuary. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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How dark it is now, shaded hedgerows in moonlight. Long liquid lanes black, slick before me. Enveloping nigrescent trees reaching to draw me into the shadows, away from silvering comfort. In deepest recesses i am now, feeling its cloying fingers, fog freezing my inner love, i search for light,please shine a light for me.... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Raw piece of work, Silver Sanctuary, and dark in its inner sanctum. I like both, raw and dark, and I like this because you gave me both in a well-written piece of poetry. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
There is a niggling sense of fear in darkness that cloys the way you write here, and I wondered if the word nigrescent means that. It's a new word for me and I'm going to look it up. The poetry is beautifully penned and I felt a shiver in the shadows.  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine imagery ... powerful writing ! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Powerful and thought provoking piece. Goldenrose. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You drew me in ... close to the nigrescent trees, very powerful poem, dear Phil. The brightest light is that which shines inside; calling for it like you did here, makes it visible. See? Your Silver Sanctuary is that. Margherita |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I really enjoyed this, my friend ... all of it, no particular line or word standing out above the rest... Well done... j. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed your poem, Tomer. The light will indeed show you the way to your Sanctuary. Wonderful, ms. e |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Hi Goldenrose, I don't know why I confused your name... I apologize. Well maybe I do... You both have a wonderful way of expressing your thoughts in poetry, I hope that's ok to say, here on your post. Ms. E |
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