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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2012-04-10 01:15 PM

Some Men Feel

They
hide well, the deepest
part

but,

some men, feel…

beyond romance, beyond
daily

they feel

it is their grumbling times
when they think we
WE
are one of the them…

and they forget…

some Men feel…

and just let go…

into walls
into arguments
sometimes, into faces…

some just

let go

others…well, they…hold it in…

they…

become

Poets.

(c)KRJ 9-2003 - repost, per request.

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2012-04-10 02:02 PM

Sunshine,
This, my dear Poetess, is one of the most insightful
true poems about men... Love it!
Ms. E

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2012-04-10 02:06 PM

Love it...though have to admit it sure describes a number of "women" I've met too, in a number of respects. Fits an awful lot of men though!!

j.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2012-04-10 02:40 PM

interesting thoughts on the causality of 'poets'!

fine writing!

[I can only attest to it being a definitive
  'curse' to be a 'poet'/Romanticist' amid
   the "Runaway American Dream"]

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-04-10 03:14 PM

Hah! Gotta love it . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2012-04-11 06:19 AM

you are on to something here my dear...

Lori

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2012-04-11 10:40 AM

Indeed "some men feel" and hold those feelings in untill they almost explode..

And then let out in gasps, deep feelings about what life has shown them

And write those rants down in organized stanzas they call poetry.

An excellent poem, Sunny

[This message has been edited by ice (04-12-2012 01:06 PM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2012-04-12 04:20 AM

Evviva! Thank God for those men who feel, indeed, dear Karilea, and when they write it down it's just a blessing.

Absolutely lovely.

Margherita

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2012-04-12 11:20 AM

And some men never "let go".

M

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2012-04-13 03:46 PM

I agree with Margherita... I'm so grateful for those who pour their feelings into words. *S*

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2012-04-14 01:12 AM

Feeling this...James

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

11 posted 2012-12-24 12:15 PM

Love this....I too am blessed that some men feel through their pens

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed. It
is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"
~Kahlil Gibran~

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

12 posted 2012-12-24 01:00 PM

Honeybee, you left out the "i".

Male poets hold it.....ok, I can go along with that.

Merry Christmas, sunshine!

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