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Autumn Sunset (part 3)
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Autumn Sunset (part 3) |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England 
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Autumn Sunset (part 3) Hand in hand they're watching, the Sun begin to set Her sun-hat lays abandoned, where once in tears she wept A blaze of red and orange, reflects within her eyes Two hearts that beat together, to roost a sea-bird flies A hush now falls around them, the waves the only sound No words to pass between them, and night sky stars abound A Harvest Moon now rising, what stories it could tell Their footsteps and their shadows, in Love together fell The breeze so softly whispers, true words of Love to her Somewhere a night-owl calling, his mate in love will stir No longer caged this bluebird, she soars into the sky A Love so true she knows now, no need to question why The sea has cooled the Sunset, the Moon low in the sky She knows this Love's forever, until the day they die And even then their shadows, will still walk on the sand Her shining eyes remember, that first time hand in hand |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ok, you have a new fan in me ... the rhymes are so fluid, very harmonious, no forcing. You are good at it! And romance of this kind always touches the heart. Margherita  |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
Margherita once again thank you Michael |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I read all three poems. They are all wonderful. So enjoyed Michelmas, Ms. E |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Quite the sunset, it's like I was there in person. Great work with the rhymes. |
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