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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were like cat feet subtle there with those saliva eyes glancing as if watching me watch you was better than other bad things we could let ourselves slip into I watched you sipping sighs after like you did when you were alone and had to hurry to get beyond where thirsty and just enough were stuck there like they were hovering perhaps it was those velvet evenings when you took what you needed gently something of under the sheet communion just to hold you over a few hours til the dawn brought you enough whiskey to stagger your laughter with sigh sounds ______________ daark |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
You make the kitty paws purr pretty. Bring the JackD and I'll find us something to drink it out of.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Spill it anywhere babe, that will be the perfect spot. Thank you for wearing this. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There's probably a law that says you shouldn't melt folk... but it would be a foul law at that.   |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"I watched you sipping sighs after like you did when you were alone and had to hurry to get beyond where thirsty and just enough were..." Your use of poetic phrasing is always excellent..I am not assuming that this comes easy to you, I believe it takes a lot of thought and time. But perhaps I am wrong, and these things just bubble up from your soul in easy rises...they seem to do that from this distance, when I read the finished product.. "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sweetsun, thank you for breaking the law with me. _______________ Iceamigo, humble thanks guy...I see lots of words on a big scrabble board and pull them off to make a picture...being blindfolded does help. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your sensuous words move upon the page with feline grace ...  Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Mar, thank you |
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