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Open Poetry #48

Down in Waikiki

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-04-02 12:51 PM

Down in Waikiki

Thanks to Murph
Pippi could surf
if you went down to Waikiki
you could see a young girl
in pigtails and red stockings
and a tight red suit
smiling and laughing
looking sleek and cute.
Oh sure, she fell off
much like her early years
when she fell off her horse
but she wasted no time
in getting back on of course.
Pippi was a joy to see,
one day she was surfing
right along side Michelle Wie
and they got along so well
that Pippi was invited to play
a game of golf with Michelle,
Tiger showed up to surf too
and he told Pippi she was a doll,
Pippi only laughed and told Tiger
not to bother to text or call.

JamesLee
01April
2012

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2012-04-02 01:08 AM

You have a great ability to write playful poetry. I love this - thank you, James.

A

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2012-04-02 02:18 AM

very nice, james, so vivid and lovely, enjoyed a lot,

yann

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-04-02 07:21 AM

Cute.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2012-04-02 09:49 AM

Mr. James!
Another excellent write, my friend.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2012-04-02 09:51 AM

Wow ... stab to the heart (Tiger's of course), but he asked for it!!!

Cool, my friend.

j.

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