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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2012-03-29 06:26 AM

I would often look under sleepy cypress trees
for the sound of your smile side yawning
those mornings seams when you said it was early
and you wished you could just sleep more

so I pretended not to notice your breasts
and how you wrote my name on them with arousal
and slept with nothing over your suggestions
as if your nudity was merely something invisible

you would do that sigh thing then and hold it
like the sound of a sliding window for voyeurs
just before you made a butterfly with your limbs
and asked I would teach you how to fly again

since you hadn't done in since you fell in love
and yes, that was just a few minutes ago, again
but you said you were clumsy at remembering
unless I was willing to show you again today

and then if I wouldn't mind, perhaps again tomorrow
____________

daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (03-29-2012 07:27 AM).]

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2012-03-29 06:34 AM

"so I pretended not to notice your breasts
and how you wrote my name on them with arousal"

Yup, yup...it's lines like these that make you an excellent writer of sensual, and romantic poetry.

Fine work, all around, every line a gem.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2012-03-29 07:09 AM

Ice...thanks so much for the read guy.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2012-03-29 07:23 AM

Awake too early
But it's never too early
To read poetry.

The Stranger
The Better
ali-san

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2012-03-29 07:27 AM

Ms Ali-san...nice to see you are still up...thanks little one

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

5 posted 2012-03-29 08:07 AM

I'm beginning to wonder if sleep is overrated. There are a horizon of tomorrows in this; you are so indulgent.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2012-03-29 08:15 AM

Ms Nice..hope you wake sleepless often. Thanks ms

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (03-29-2012 11:13 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2012-03-29 10:45 AM

just before you made a butterfly with your limbs
and asked I would teach you how to fly again

since you hadn't done in since you fell in love
and yes, that was just a few minutes ago, again

~*~

Tomorrow does come
in your world...
and we love the way
you show it.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2012-03-29 11:14 AM

Sweetsun...thanks lady friend...you smile me

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

9 posted 2012-03-29 03:29 PM

now that right there is...just lovely~*~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2012-03-29 10:45 PM

Nice...James

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2012-03-30 06:48 AM

BBBel1e, thanks bbgirl

_________

James, thanks guy

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2012-04-01 08:58 AM

Delightful and wistful in a way ... for sure you are always one step ahead with your poetry, which holds irresistible charm whether it is set in the past, in the now or in tomorrow.

Margherita

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