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Open Poetry #48

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-03-18 09:25 PM

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I didn't know

the last time

I saw her

would be

the last

time...

JamesLee
17March
2012

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-03-18 09:28 PM

Chalk it up to experience and move on.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2012-03-19 03:46 PM

I understand the ache in this for I've felt it... but sometimes it's good we don't know... Joy is too illusive to keep it from ever existing by knowing its ending. *sigh*

Excellent write!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2012-03-20 01:09 AM

I think suthern said it best. Ditto!
Very much enjoyed the read, my friend.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2012-03-20 09:17 AM

Very cool...j.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2012-03-21 10:28 PM

Thank you Jerry, suthern, JL and jwesley...possibly if you knew it was the last time you would see someone and you didn't want it to be, you might create a scene or become to emotional...sometimes the other doesn't want you to know for their own reasons...James

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