Open Poetry #48 |
The Mask |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Uploaded with ImageShack.us Mardi Gras she wore a black cat's mask the mask, tantalizing on her alabaster skin her willingness to play act with the mask provoked him more than love had ever done love had made him a gentle lover considerate and kind the mask conjured up near violence in the act she allowed him to hold her her lips impossible to kiss through the mask tantalized him even more she was his frustration soft murmurs came from behind the mask driving him quite insane he leaned over attempted to kiss unkissable lips she deftly moved her head arched her chin upward exposing the softness that was her throat he acquiesced bending toward it ©March 14, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Meow Mr. Bolton! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha!! Thanks for the . . . er . . . comment, Mrs. Rhoden. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Was she the female Lone Ranger.. Did she let you peek under her mask? You were probably not interested in who she really was anyway. enjoyed |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Naw, Ice. Her identity was safe with me, and in fact, I really wasn't -- as you so aptly observed -- all that interested in her name, it was her ... that spurred me on. Thanks, Ice, for being here. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, James...Jerry ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (03-19-2012 06:47 AM).] |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
A mask huh... Interesting... and the poem too. lol, enjoyed, me. e |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sometimes mask can come in handy, ms. e, in the excitement of the game. Eh, add a bit of flavor to the same old same old. Thank you for being heah. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
oh my~*~* Mr. Pat~*~*~ playfulness with an edge....enjoyed this very much!
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks Baby Girl, I much appreciate the comment. I see you sitting up there above me with a new poem. I have already read it, but will have to come back to it later to try and get my head wrapped around it. thank you again for being here. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
DITTO!! Nice write, Jerry. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, JL. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
mmm. enjoyed Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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splashMeadow Junior Member
since 2011-06-09
Posts 20UK |
Purrrrrfectly enticing! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Nan and splashMeadow. I appreciate you stopping by. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting 'write' ! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, secondhanddreampoet. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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