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cashmere of freckled stone
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there are freckled heaven presentations when you are the leaning tree of whispers you send godiva back and forth by those windows casting silhouettes like fetish whiskey without footprints as bread crumb directions I have heard your laughter along the walls and your footsteps strumming musical applause as one would turn to read the curves of you with never enough time to fully travel lest you are gone again like a minute ago the blessing of time is never in circles but your motives are as lovely convolutions a merry go round of kaleidoscope reality dancing the glass of that window statuary when your smile becomes something never frozen and your glances are feathers within cellophane ________________ daark |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and now I feel pretty, just for reading this...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sweetsun....you were lovely before my pen was drawn from it's sheath. Thanks lady. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
Remind me to stock up on that cellophane the next time we're in Home Good's...daddy! xoxo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
BBBel1e....we can get the corporate sized rolls at Costco...thanks little one |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Your pen etches lines between the freckles, like a drawing of connect-the-dots. You leave a stamp that says "D lives here."  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Pretty N...and that is your favorite tattoo? thanks hon |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I have heard your laughter along the walls and your footsteps strumming musical applause as one would turn to read the curves of you with never enough time to fully travel lest you are gone again like a minute ago Soft as cashmere... and every bit as delightful to the senses. *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
great 'write' ... grand-fine imagery. I am particularly fond of: "as one would turn to read the curves of you with never enough time to fully travel lest you are gone" fully (impressionistically) captures the 'slice of life' transience of it all ... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Suthern, thank you sexy lady. ___ James friend, thanks _____ secondhand, thanks huge for the review |
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