Open Poetry #48 |
I Was There |
Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
There seems to be some deja vu- As I walk through the street. Perhaps an eery feeling- When some landmark, my eyes meet. As I walk along the RiverWalk- And hear it's gentle flow- I seem to see the Longhorns Drink...one hundred years ago. As I catch sight of the chapel Gleaming in the full moonlight I recall the Mex'can lances- And the sabres burnished bright. I recall the drunkard Bowie- We all called him Colonel Jim- And the laughing Tennessean- And the men he brought with him. Travis with his soldier pride- A man for all of that- The demand for our surrender- His refusal ringing flat. He answered with a cannon shot- And we all gave a shout- The bugles blew "duellego" We all know what that's about. There were thirteen days we held them Reinforcements never came- I hear Travis cursing Fannin- Whose command was slain in shame. I recall the fatal third time- When the Mex'cans breached the wall- And Travis crying, "Rally!" Just before I saw him fall. I saw Crockett club his rifle- Laughing as he stood his ground- Slew an escort for his passing Ere the bullets brought him down. Then the silence quickly settled- I could hear the Con'quers tread All around the mission courtyard Where we Texicans lay dead. I can feel my eyes start burning- As I walk across the square And stand beside the Alamo- I remember I was there.... I was there in 1836- And heard the muskets crack And at times when I am lonely In the moonlight I go back. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I feel as though I've just walked through San Antonio... then and now. *S* Beautiful, haunting write!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
And as I read I couldn't help but think: "Remember the Alamo!" Excellent reminder just how quickly our land marks become a tourist attraction for the sellers of trinkets and not for the remembrances of hard times and sacrifice. Enjoyed. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh, I love this. So happy that you decied to remain among us and share. Alison |
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