The Smile That Lit Up My World

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Open Poetry #48

The Smile That Lit Up My World

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-03-12 09:11 PM

The Smile That Lit Up My World

Sometime when I give into
the thoughts of my past
I think of the woman
that was once my love,
then I find myself both
laughing and crying
in remembrance of her,
she was such a special girl
she had the smile that
lighted up my world...

JamesLee
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-03-12 09:53 PM

Sorry that same smile clouded up and rained on you, James.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2012-03-14 07:50 PM

"I find myself both
laughing and crying
in remembrance of her,"

Sweet thoughts sure can make for heart
breaks.

Enjoyed your write, James

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2012-03-19 06:56 PM

Thank you Jerry and JL for the nice responses...James

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