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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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circumstance and happenstance caught in the middle of the deep side out of nowhere we meet again I am an avid swimmer at least I used to be I pull myself to the edge as I whisper something that you never heard me say because..... I had turned my head...... just slighty...... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm really loving this. Leaves so much to the imagination. Very nice poetry... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Just love the metaphor in this!! Perfectly written my friend!! jimmy |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Though you’re swimming, you focus in on the surface so beautifully. Enjoyed!  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
absolutely beautiful and delicate, enjoyed a lot, yann |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thanks to all, This may be the first poem of many more that reflect a changing in my muse ... thank you all again for the replies I am glad you enjoyed.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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