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Open Poetry #48

Becoming Moments

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-03-10 03:32 AM

Becoming Moments

Some women
are so sweet
that they
knock you
off your feet;
her smile
making you
go wild
her hugs
feeling as warm
as love
and her kiss
becoming moments
of bliss.

JamesLee
9March
2012

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2012-03-10 03:49 AM

Nice!
Kat >^..^<

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2012-03-10 06:44 AM

aww! James this is so sweet, I love this lil moment of yours, thanks for sharing it ~hugs~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-03-10 07:02 AM

Yes indeed, the opposite sex surely does knock us off our feet. Some of us never recover from it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2012-03-11 11:13 PM

Thank you Katahdin, tracie and Jerry for the wonderful responses...James

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2012-03-12 12:45 PM

If sweet women knock you off your feet, what do baaad women do for you, lol... Enjoyed your poem, ms.e

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2012-03-12 09:06 PM

Like hot and cold...you need some of each...James

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