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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2012-01-25 01:36 AM

COUNTRYSIDE PATH
25 January 2012

My hand ensconced in yours
your eyes lost in mine
and colours are more alive
the sun more passionate
the moon gentler
our smiles softer
and our path so mesmerisingly inviting
as our dawn-ecstasy beckons
and leads our footprints in concert
through the glorious day
into the delicious privacy
of our sweet-on-the-tongue
melting-dusk.

Owl

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2012-01-25 01:42 AM

mmmm. I feel like I am walking on a path that few have walked on. Love this, Diana.

A

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2012-01-25 01:53 AM

Smiles, Alison. I think quite a few have walked on a similar path, but not in the same way, nor with the same results - which is probably what you are saying anyway, lol. More smiles.

Owl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-01-25 05:34 AM

Feel like a Peeping Tom . . . Still . . . I look.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2012-01-25 06:18 AM

Smiles, Jerry. If you are talking about the last part, I hope you liked the thick, heavy, cream lining of the closed curtains (drapes?). More smiles.

Owl

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

5 posted 2012-01-25 06:59 AM

so emotionally uplifting~~~

write-on, Owl~*~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2012-01-25 07:36 AM

Thank you, Belle. I am glad you find it so. Smiles.

Owl

Ron63
Junior Member

since 2012-03-18

Posts 49
Suffolk, Eng, UK

7 posted 2012-03-22 08:15 PM

This is the second poem of yours I have read, and you have a wonderful way with words full of imaginative imagery. I particularly loved the last two lines.

If I could offer points, I would give this a full five out of five.

Gunslinger
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 901
TX, USA

8 posted 2012-03-23 01:57 AM

How unbelievably romantic and intimate. Lovely write, Diana.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

9 posted 2012-03-23 03:00 AM

Thank you, Ron - and I enjoyed the 2 poems of yours that I read. Nature is my breath, my inspiration and my daily delight.

Owl

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

10 posted 2012-03-23 03:02 AM

Thank you, John, for sharing my countryside walk with me with such delight.

Owl

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