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Open Poetry #48

Cocktails in the sun

MICHELMAS
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since 2012-02-15

Posts 305
Lancashire England

0 posted 2012-03-06 07:24 AM

Cocktails in the sun

The swirling mists of time
Confuse the colour of your eyes
And in the fountain square
The water dances to your sighs
Red lips your cocktail sips
Beads down your valley you perspire
As shaded from the sun
Your mind considers your desire
And shadows lengthen then
So near but far the music plays
The clock the hours to chime
And were those really better days
An empty chair I see
Please come, sit here, with me

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-03-06 07:43 AM

The ending made the poem.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2012-03-12 11:19 PM

Enjoyed the cocktail in the sun,
ms. e

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2012-03-12 11:33 PM

Oh my... beautiful image I'm taking from this one.

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

4 posted 2012-03-13 09:13 AM

Cheers!

~enjoyed this~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2012-03-13 11:31 AM

Liked the whole thing, but agree wholeheartedly with Jerry... love the end.

j.

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