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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2013-12-26 07:35 PM

C'est Magnifique

A woman I met today
reminds me of a French woman
I knew long ago,
long, long ago,
she looks like her
she talks like her
but not in French,
thank goodness not in French,
for I could never understand
all the words she would say to me
when we made love
but it sounded very nice,
very, very nice
and sexy too
and when we spoke
the universal language
she would try to teach
me a few French words
but my mind was on other things,
soft and sensual things,
exciting moments
to remember forever,
and her kiss
so exquisite
so totally and
irresistably
marvelous.
She had it all
and she shared
her best with me,
c'est magnifique.

JamesLee
25December
2013

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (12-27-2013 07:22 PM).]

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

1 posted 2013-12-26 10:05 PM

Wow how weird, this is the same subject almost as a piece I have just written, that brings back great memories of France. Nicely written and much enjoyed thank you.

Is this heaven?

shoeless Joe Jackson.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2013-12-26 10:17 PM

Ha! Was there with you James...almost seeing, feeling as you...

enjoyed.

j.

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

3 posted 2013-12-27 01:05 AM

magical moments well captured James. Fine writing.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2013-12-27 01:09 AM

hello james, it is always surprising to meet someone who reminds us a love, the poem is sensitive end emotionnal, i loved it,

in french, we say : "c'est magnifique"

have a nice day

yann

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2013-12-27 09:36 AM

You have captured intimacy to the nth, James, thanks for sharing.

~*~ Your past is just a story. Once you realize this, it has no power over you. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2013-12-27 07:25 PM

Thank you Olias, jwesley, prasad, 2islander2 and Jerry for the nice responses...yann I wanted to use the French spelling but wasn't sure, I tried to correct it after you showed me the correct spelling...James

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