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paderewski
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0 posted 2013-12-24 09:20 AM



Saw her standing there
She said
Back off I’m dangerous

©June 12, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ Mercedes Benz: A mechanical device that increases sexual arousal in women. ~*~

© Copyright 2013 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2013-12-24 09:39 AM


Cute, dear Jerry! As it was June, you may have seen more of her, than if you had seen her in Winter ...

Love and peace.
Margherita

paderewski
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2 posted 2013-12-24 09:44 AM


Margherita, Margherita, Margherita. Gotta love it! Great comment. Thank yew.

~*~ Mercedes Benz: A mechanical device that increases sexual arousal in women. ~*~

Rex Allen McCoy
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3 posted 2013-12-24 11:23 PM


Wow... perhaps she saw you first
~
enjoyed

     


paderewski
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4 posted 2013-12-25 09:29 AM


Ah . . . Could have been Rex Allen, could have been. Thank you for being here.

~*~ Mercedes Benz: A mechanical device that increases sexual arousal in women. ~*~

jwesley
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5 posted 2013-12-25 07:49 PM


Ha! Better words were never spoken!!

Very good, my friend.

j.

paderewski
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6 posted 2013-12-25 07:56 PM


You got it, J, thanks . . .

~*~ Mercedes Benz: A mechanical device that increases sexual arousal in women. ~*~

EmmaRose
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7 posted 2013-12-25 09:21 PM


very intriguing as I reread this several times
cool stuff, or shall I say hot stuff

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2013-12-25 10:03 PM


Ahhh , , Hot will work, Emma. Thanks.

~*~ Your past is just a story. Once you realize this, it has no power over you. ~*~

ebonygirl
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9 posted 2013-12-26 02:32 PM


It may have been in your eyes, JP!
Lol, well done,
Ms. E

2islander2
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10 posted 2013-12-26 02:35 PM


sometimes, better be prudent, love the special poetry here,

have a merry Christmas


yann

Prasad Nataraj
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11 posted 2013-12-27 01:16 AM


prefer woman who make their intentions clear at the beginning itself.Thoughtful Write, Jerry.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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12 posted 2013-12-27 10:10 AM


It has yet to be known if you heeded the warning.....
Lori

luminosity
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13 posted 2013-12-27 12:52 PM


lol 10 words well spoken
JamesMichael
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14 posted 2013-12-28 08:13 PM


Possibly just what you were looking for?...James
JerryPat2
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15 posted 2013-12-28 08:45 PM


You may be right Ms E . . . Thanks for stopping by.

Thank you very much yann.

I hear you, Prasad, I know to know where I stand also.

Nope Lori, I did not heed the warning. A warning to me is like an invitation.

Thanks luminosity.

Yeah you’re right James.

~*~ Your past is just a story. Once you realize this, it has no power over you. ~*~

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