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Open Poetry #48

I am almost a saint

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2013-12-17 01:10 AM

In the morning I am a saint,
I think of my church
And makes my prayers,
I would preach almost
So that we adore me,
But the day spends
And the sins ignite,
My kindness wastes away
And my will weakens
Because my church, I confess it
It is your temple and its attractive domes.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2013-12-17 03:48 PM

Dear Yann, you bare your soul and your heart with this beautiful verse. Any man who thinks of his love as a temple shows a saintly side of his personality. I don't think that this kind of worship is sinful.

Love,
Marherita

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2013-12-18 12:03 PM

oh margherita, thanks a lot for the BEAUTIFUL comment...I find recomfort in your words, and elevation of the poem,

have a nice day

yann

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

3 posted 2013-12-20 07:27 AM

fine writing Yann, Enjoyed your worship here.True and straight to the point.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2013-12-20 10:54 AM

thanks nataraj, your comment touched me by his "à propos" (accuracy)

have a nice day

yann

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