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Until There Was You (#2)
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Until There Was You (#2) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Until There Was You On many a star-drenched night, with the bright Winter moon as heaven’s beacon, fine silver shadow-memories and dreams of youth and love danced along the deep-forest paths through these ancient rocks and precipitous slopes just beyond the conscious mind’s event horizon, yet my insular world had lost all joy, hope, and color, and I had somehow forgotten even how to look up … until there was you. Now my heart is that grand Winter moon. --- b. e. adams (12/7/2013) |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
Passionately done, Bruce. You always make a point of giving the reader the strength of your personal environment as you write of love and now. ~*~ You can't start the next chapter of your life if you keep re-reading the last one. ~*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
'til there was you~~~ a favorite song of mine M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...James |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
enjoyed it.fine writing. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Excellent as usual.Jo |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
splendid, love gives wings and sense, thanks for the beautiful share yann |
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