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Open Poetry #48
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KentAshbyKorb
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since 2013-05-05
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0 posted 2013-11-24 11:01 PM


The sky a dying ember
To match what rests between
My eyes and all her members
It's fall that falls between

Blue to pink and purple
Orange and yellow leafs
Around the bent and circle
The circumvent so deep

The day within her casket
My heart the fires seat
Have but to simply bask in
The end of present feats!
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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
1 posted 2014-01-12 07:07 AM

While joined together as one, each of your poem's quatrains seems to stand on it's own.

Nicely done in my opinion.

...just bein' Bluesy
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