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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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Midwest

0 posted 2013-11-20 08:17 AM



Beneath diminishing light and
escalating winds, the hands
of both love and loss tenderly
brush their bony frames

reaching, slimmed down sycamores
possessing my window in the
stifled sunlight...as I'm warmed
to the beauty of the winters
we shared, those magical days



[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (11-21-2013 09:31 PM).]

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paderewski
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since 2011-02-04
Posts 287
Louisiana, USA
1 posted 2013-11-20 08:28 AM


Nice reflections of the good days, Emma.

~*~ My fake plants died because I did not pretend to water them. ~*~

Gale
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since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
2 posted 2013-11-20 10:30 AM


Very beautiful, Emma Rose!
You're so poetical nature, you can create beauty and romantic appeal even of washing plates and dishes!
Well, I don't know, but I think that you could.
So could I
Thank you for sharing!

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2013-11-20 02:04 PM


Exquisite, Emma Rose.

Owl

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
4 posted 2013-11-21 02:51 PM


fine imagery ... a most pleasant 'write' !!
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
5 posted 2013-11-21 02:56 PM


magical poem, beautiful read,

yann

EmmaRose
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6 posted 2013-11-21 08:02 PM


thanks so much for stopping by and reading me always appreciated

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA
7 posted 2013-11-21 08:06 PM


Pretty write
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2013-12-04 09:03 PM


enjoyed...James
KentAshbyKorb
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since 2013-05-05
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Nc USA
9 posted 2013-12-05 04:33 PM


Definitely lends a solid consciousness of the heartache of love and loss!
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
10 posted 2013-12-07 08:49 PM


As usual, I much enjoyed your words, my friend, and wish you many "magical days",

jimmy

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
11 posted 2013-12-13 12:04 PM


quote:
as I'm warmed
to the beauty of the winters
we shared,


I really love how you make your thoughts dance, dear EmmaRose!

Love,
Margherita

ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
Posts 284
U.S , Ca
12 posted 2013-12-13 03:19 PM


Good day to you ma'am and your memories held dear
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