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paderewski
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0 posted 2013-11-03 07:00 AM



the fist of society
enslaves
with hard-core
diligence
it never relaxes
pulls no punches

strange thoughts
to think
as I
sketch the outline
of your hips
with my finger

once we were in love
an eternity ago it seems
the apparition
of your core
dregs itself up as I
remove my finger from your ghost

©October 31, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ Who remembers Pete Best? He was the drummer before Ringo Starr ~*~

[This message has been edited by paderewski (11-03-2013 07:43 AM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2013-11-03 07:23 AM


Paddy, I really like what you have done here.  It is rich in emotions stirred together. Made me think of love as the cream and sugar being slowly stirred into a cup of bitter strong coffee.

Good morning my friend!

Lori  

paderewski
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2 posted 2013-11-03 07:36 AM


Good morning to you, Lori, and thanks so much for your nice comments.

~*~ Who remembers Pete Best? He was the drummer before Ringo Starr ~*~

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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3 posted 2013-11-03 07:21 PM


love will overcome any earthy obstacle
good flowing poem

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2013-11-03 07:56 PM


very interesting 'write' indeed !
paderewski
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5 posted 2013-11-03 10:17 PM


Thanks Bruce, I appreciate your thoughts. (This is JerryPat2) by the way.

~*~ Who remembers Pete Best? He was the drummer before Ringo Starr ~*~

paderewski
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6 posted 2013-11-04 08:21 AM


Thank you very much Emma.

~*~ Who remembers Pete Best? He was the drummer before Ringo Starr ~*~

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