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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
the fist of society enslaves with hard-core diligence it never relaxes pulls no punches strange thoughts to think as I sketch the outline of your hips with my finger once we were in love an eternity ago it seems the apparition of your core dregs itself up as I remove my finger from your ghost ©October 31, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ Who remembers Pete Best? He was the drummer before Ringo Starr ~*~ [This message has been edited by paderewski (11-03-2013 07:43 AM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Paddy, I really like what you have done here. It is rich in emotions stirred together. Made me think of love as the cream and sugar being slowly stirred into a cup of bitter strong coffee. Good morning my friend! Lori  |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
Good morning to you, Lori, and thanks so much for your nice comments. ~*~ Who remembers Pete Best? He was the drummer before Ringo Starr ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
love will overcome any earthy obstacle good flowing poem |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very interesting 'write' indeed ! |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
Thanks Bruce, I appreciate your thoughts. (This is JerryPat2) by the way. ~*~ Who remembers Pete Best? He was the drummer before Ringo Starr ~*~ |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
Thank you very much Emma. ~*~ Who remembers Pete Best? He was the drummer before Ringo Starr ~*~ |
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