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paderewski
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0 posted 2013-10-31 08:17 AM



my fingers
caress the wonders of your essence
undrape you
until you have been rendered nude
like the blind
using hands to discover your sensuousness
my fingers
realize the pure wonder of you

©October 26, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ Behind every great man is a woman rolling her eyes. ~*~

© Copyright 2013 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2013-10-31 03:20 PM


Paddy, you are waxing romantic. I like it.

Lori

paderewski
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2 posted 2013-10-31 03:44 PM


Appreciate your kind thoughts, Lori.

~*~ Behind every great man is a woman rolling her eyes. ~*~

katahdin
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3 posted 2013-10-31 09:28 PM


OHHH! Nice one!
Kat >^..^<

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2013-11-01 05:13 AM


No doubt, sometimes magic unfolds upon the fingertips. And closed eyes amplify the emotions ... well said.

Margherita

paderewski
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5 posted 2013-11-01 01:09 PM


Thank you so much Kat.

~*~ Behind every great man is a woman rolling her eyes. ~*~

paderewski
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6 posted 2013-11-01 01:10 PM


Margherita, thank you for your thoughts . . .

~*~ Behind every great man is a woman rolling her eyes. ~*~

Juju
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In your dreams
7 posted 2013-11-01 11:23 PM


This is great. I love it.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2013-11-19 09:37 PM


better than nice...James
EmmaRose
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9 posted 2013-11-20 08:43 AM


wistfully lovely

paderewski
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10 posted 2013-11-20 08:45 AM


Thank you Emma.

~*~ My fake plants died because I did not pretend to water them. ~*~

CastleGuard
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11 posted 2013-11-21 12:25 PM



...like the blind, soft caress engages both the sense of touch...and the imagination.

CG

paderewski
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12 posted 2013-11-21 12:31 PM


Thank you Juju and James. Appreciate your comments also, CG.

~*~ My fake plants died because I did not pretend to water them. ~*~

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