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Michael
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0 posted 2013-10-19 06:53 PM



Recurrences


Worn and restless, weary— wan,
Living his life the best he can;
He stumbles forth along his way,
An exhumed ghost from yesterday.

The blessid spirits guide him on,
(Through life's experience, withdrawn);
A mingled chorus in his head,
Refusing to reveal he's dead.

But sometimes he sees things aren't right,
With all lost to eternal night.
While creeping fingers in the mist
Urge him forward— gently persist.

And so he follows, knowing not
The reason why; an afterthought
Of decisions he never made,
While envoys of regret invade.

All while the passions of the living,
(Vile, wretched, and unforgiving),
Push him further, never showing
The path he's on, or where it's going...

...Or why he cannot turn around—
Find his way back to holy ground.
...Or why silence he searches for
Somehow got lost in evermore.

Where all he knows, in fact, is lost
Sleek ambition's exacting cost!
The price paid to appease a dream:
Exhausted eyes, no more agleam.

Till, with the death of all that matters,
He'll not hear the glass, as it shatters;
Just linger on to start again,
Some other place— some other when.


Michael Anderson

4/20/2013

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OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2013-10-20 03:51 AM


Beautiful, Michael, with multiple tinges of hope.

Owl

Gale
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since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
2 posted 2013-10-20 06:25 AM


I like your poem, Michael!
It's sad but give some hope in the end!
And I like its flow )
Well written!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2013-10-22 10:19 PM


fine writing...James
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