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Open Poetry #48
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
0 posted 2012-03-01 09:24 PM


The snap of my
I don't like you
lash of my tongue
tale telling my
threatened
self abuse
Reeking of
tainted breath
watering for
the bad for me
The snap at
like a dog
to fleas
The self observation
on hindsight's dirty knees
view of my life
I'm slitting my wrists
with a butter knife


LGR(C)3/1/12
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-03-01 09:33 PM

I resemble that to an extent. Quite a piece of writing, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2012-03-01 09:39 PM

Thanks my friend I appreciate your continued support

Lori
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